I Pissed Him Off (One Stroke)

Taste your bitter tears while my heart stings with the slap of your tongue lashing.

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

.....was I just steamrolled by words? Very nicely done xD

[Dr. Wood ?]

you certainly have quite an unusual talent with words, Less is more

[Frank James Davis]

Apparently, no winners, here.
A cutting lash of extremely well-written retaliation!

[khalid]

i like it..short simple but in target

[Poet Sayings]

Wow, the ire says it all, the intention is to depict the actual cut, the lashing
of words upon another, the energy that casts its decline to a low, destitute,
or demoralized state of being, this poem is picturesque, extreme intensity,
when two hearts collide, in so few words that invoke pain, I like this ^_^

[JustLorry]

Well he obviously deserved it. not that i'm taking sides or anything, but you were right and he was wrong. End of.
ps....excellent what you can say in so few words.