pull me down

pull me down

A Poem by Matt
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i wrote this to the music of sound check by the gorillaz y-y-y is the voice pausing .... is a long pause between lines rrrr is the sound echoing.

"
hey-y-y-y-y

I dont carrrre.
no I, i dont care.
No, no i dont care.
.....

i dont carr-r-re...anymorrrre.

allll of,,, of the doors
all of,, these cloooosed doors.
i dont know you anymorrre.
i wont let you dowwn,,
anymorrrre.

never let you dowwn.

please wont you stay...
slowly watch me decaaay,,
iiii dont care anymore.

please wont you stay.
Breathe, breathe another day
please dont shut the dooor..
never let you dowwn.

No, no nevermiiiind.
no neverrrmiinnd.
i dont care anymorre.

i dont car-r-r-rrre
no I.
I Dont care .
Dont care anymoo-oore.

Just run away-ay-ayyyy
run away...
I dont want this anymore.
Cant love you anymore.
No.

Not another daa-ay-aayy
please just forget me nowww.-w.
no i dont care.
no, no i dont care.
dont hear me nowww.

just go awaayyyy-y-yy.
i'll shut it for you.


© 2010 Matt



Author's Note

Matt
all comments and reviews are welcome.. i hope i can someday put this to music

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Love the gorillaz.
Since I know the band and the song, this came out really good in my head.

"just go awaayyyy-y-yy.
i'll shut it for you."

^Awesome mental images in my head of Noodle slamming a door shut. lol
Do put this in music if you can. I'd like to hear it.



Posted 7 Years Ago


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Love the gorillaz.
Since I know the band and the song, this came out really good in my head.

"just go awaayyyy-y-yy.
i'll shut it for you."

^Awesome mental images in my head of Noodle slamming a door shut. lol
Do put this in music if you can. I'd like to hear it.



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I forgotted the rating :P Sorry.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I likes it. Especially the "Breathe, breathe another day."

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Added on January 15, 2010
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