Apathetic wind.

chilled out poetry

Apathy shines.

Shining like the cigarette,
off my ring that's always there.

Rain never felt so smooth.
Glistening, falling from the night sky.
Street lights flicker as i walk past the memories.
And the sky is alive when i clinch to the past.

With a loud crack i let go of my selfishness.
I let go of my heart and forget what never was.
And what I always wanted to be.

Silent words never described the wind.
Waves of depressive smiles in the gusts.
Laughter from the moving leaves.
Believing with and against me.

The dog doesn't mind.
She always follows her master.
Following to edge of the cliff.
Waiting for the command to follow where ever I go.

Snow white paws dripping with empathy.
Ears always flapping in apathy of life.
Always there to comfort my leaky eyes.
Licking the tears off my cheeks.
(Maybe she just likes the taste of rain.)

One last breath of toxic happiness.
The smoke drifts off crashing into my dreams.
The clouds clear, the sun always rises.
but I'll only sleep a few minuets to help forget.

Wake up and remember all over again.
The Wind is calm.

Author's Note

i just wanted to write something.
No real emotion in it other than just me being apathetic and chill with life.

Reviews

[D.L.G.]

I dont enjoy most poems but i enjoyed this one!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought it was good though. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Valentine]

Sometimes I wonder just what is in your mind when you write poems of this type..I do not know whether to spank you or to hug you for the way you are able to express your feelings..lol and God bless..Kathie

[Sseoni]

I really liked this poem of yours! It was peculiar, but in a good way of course. It's very different from the stuff that I usually read, which is great! It's always great to read different writing like this; it's refreshing! Brilliant poem! :D

[Jennika has a short att..]

I envy your amazing skill to write about whatever. Interesting poem; I'd like to read more like this. I notice I tend to be a bit random or jump from one subject to another..aw well. Great job.

[snapstache]

Thsi was wonderful.
The modd was very sad and upsetting but in a good way...if that makes sense. :)
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[Rain Kissed Secret]

I found it disheartening to read. It was calm and controlled in a very negative tone. My mind keeps wondering to what chill actually means and how we got that word in our vocabulary.. Huh. Oh well. It was fairly good.

[Micah_s5]

Felt depressing, but really chill and almost happy in a way haha. Like not a care in the world. Good write, was interesting to read.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

magnificent write

[Frantzuu]

wow this is great dude, very metaphoric, and detail, stunning write!!