One night fall.

eh.

So where do we go from here...
You became everyone of my fears.
There is no certain direction...
You cut me off at the intersection.
Your killing me like a sickening infection.

These thoughts,
(rebelliously salacious.)
Can’t find any recollection,
of what you've done to me.
And I sing these words of harmonyyy...--

I breath these words so silently.
What the F**K is wrong!!?
Whoaaaa ohhh oh.
What the F**k is wrong wiiiith me..
With you.
stop...

...Please forgive me.
You’ll be alone in the morning.
But f**k you.
To you I’m just a game.
You’ll leave me like the rest..
This will end all the same.
I know one day.

go.

Whoaaaa ohhh aoohhhh aohh!!!

You define my insecurities.

(Another reliability.)

ohhh.

 

Put your nails down my throat.
Pull my heart out so i choke.
Words that hit me mentally.
Life doesn't f**k you gently.

Regression turned to aggressive acts.
Complete in the content of being left for dead.
Life is full of s**t you never said.
so stop. lying.

Girl you’re so uncertain.
So ill write u off as irrelevant.
You say one word to me. 
Don't you dare.
I know u wouldn't care.
If it makes me bleed.

It was my blunt honesty

Go.
Scream your lungs out!
Sing till my throat rips out.!

All the words we know so well.
These lyrics have burned us all.

...The sun has left the morning.
You left without your temptation.

(was a beautiful devastation.)
Leaving me alone wondering.
When you'll take it back.

stop.

a one night romance falls.

 

 

Author's Note

idk if this is any good. still needs some work

Reviews

[Amanda]

Sounds like this could be made into a play or a short story.

[AbsentElements]

I actually really like this. It's bold, and I personally could never say anything like this to someone no matter how much I wanted to. It's powerful. Nice job.

[AllyKinzz:)]

This is a .... Hm.... Different Poem...But i enjoyed it alot. :D
Great job:D grabbed my attention at the title. From there i was on a thrill ride almost. Your words took me for a ride. :D lOvE It! :D

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. It sounded like a screamo song to me though. I think it was great how it is. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Jennika has a short att..]

Dude you're an amazing writer
"I know you wouldn't care
If it makes me bleed
It was my blunt honesty"
That was definatley my favorite part

[Rain Kissed Secret]

Heh. I agree with Living Proof. Its good the way it is, but I can see you doing better on it. I like it. It makes me think and it brings up memories. Kinda sucks for me afterward, but you got what you wanted; A reaction. ^-^ Good job

[Living Proof.]

I think it's really good the way it is. I can totally relate. Nicely done (: