Collide.

Collide.

A Poem by vido.
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A car crash in few words.

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Through windshields
and crushed glass,
he had never seen such beauty
until it crashed into his car.

© 2015 vido.


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I want it to be a beautiful woman that came through the windshield. Maybe he's drunk? Maybe it's dark? MAn, I could muse on this all day. Clen prose, well choices, good job dude!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Whatever that beauty was, it sure made a impact.
Serious or satirical, yo've brought an interest to mind and a smile to face with this brief composition.

Thank you for both! ⁓ Richard

Posted 8 Years Ago


sharp and clean...well penned and thought provoking...

Posted 8 Years Ago


An interesting take on an accident... beauty in the chaos... like the double play on the word collide, too: a collision of vehicles and of thoughts...

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on July 8, 2015
Last Updated on July 8, 2015
Tags: car, crash, death, beauty, pain

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vido.
vido.

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Louise Vido. 21. "Sometimes I can hear my bones under the weight of all the lives I'm not living." It is a profound thing to feel so very deeply. www.louiseplace.com more..

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