Two sides of the coin

Two sides of the coin

A Poem by Vidya Bacchus
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Struggling with yourself

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          Two sides of the coin

 

I am this person,

But you change me into her,

Who in the blink of the eye ,

Can bring you to your knees ,

With a smile on your face.

 

I am different than she,

Sweeter,quieter,better,

But she has all the fun,

While I am busy being good,

I'm jealous of her sometimes.

 

She knows what she wants,

And exactly how to get it,

With a sultry smile ,

And a wicked gleam in her eyes,

You willingly follow her into the fire.

 

I think she would wreak havoc,

If given half the chance,

And run roughshod over all those in her path,

But I am looking and realizing,

That the only one in her path.....is me.

© 2014 Vidya Bacchus


Author's Note

Vidya Bacchus
Thinking.Just thinking

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a very interesting piece. I tend to agree with Marie about the split personality.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Lol.....maybe who knows ?Thank you kind sir :)
Thought-provoking. Nicely penned. I enjoyed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you Britt :)
Beautiful piece, I really liked it. Nicely written.

Kaze~

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you Kaze :)
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

9 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-D
Yes.. I am also thinking. Give her a little chance, trust me you'll do better. I stopped the competetive, extrovert part if me for year and it did me no good. Hey.. i am involved in your poem. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you Penny.You may be right :)
Penny

9 Years Ago

My pleasure... and I am always right, hehe. Keep writing
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Lol.......very funny you :)
This is a very interesting thought. I admire the way it addresses the dichotomy of affection. The rough and the smooth of the thing. That strange business where the mastery is in service and the service in power. Good thoughts - thanks.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you Delmar for this lovely review :)
Lol! Well, don't feel bad, pretty. Devils love making angels happy, No matter how far an angel is.
By the way, now may I ask, what inspires you writing this piece??? lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Uhh Huhh I hear you Neon lol
Neon

9 Years Ago

Lol! Your just still as awesome as nice as sexy as hot as before. I loved talking with ya, pretty.
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Love talking to you too my friend :)
Bitter truth..
I personally liked this ""while I am busy being good I'm jealous of her"
This I think the very powerful line n I'll remember it always..
nice piece n thanks for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you Basu.I think we all want to just let the other side of our personality out sometimes :)
Basu Gupta

9 Years Ago

Agreed..everyone does that..
great write I liked this poem very much
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you again very much :)
Sounds ike a split personality to me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

That it does .Thank you Marie :)
Ah, do we really know a person by observing them? Can we tell what goes on in their brain or in their heart? Not totally...and then there are many who show the world only a facade. It's true, some men (and some women) fall for this sort of flirty person....a person who has no inner substance at all. It boggles the mind. Still, you can not allow it to change who you are.....you have to be happy when you look in the mirror. Good work here. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Lydi for this wonderful review :)
We are sometimes even more than two people. Sometimes we act sometimes we don't. Sometimes we do and regret it.Other times we kick ourselves for missed opportunities. We are multidimensional but it's hard to wrap our minds around more than one self image. Sometimes you wish that other person would just take over and fix or take over it all but I think the DSM ( Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders) has a name for that lol.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Wow thank you Blue.Yes sometimes I wish I could yield to the lure of my darker self :)

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