I Will Be There

I Will Be There

A Poem by Vidya Bacchus
"

When someone is there for you whether happy or sad.

"

              I Will Be There     

 

I know how sad you are sometimes,

As you hide your wounds from the world,

I have seen your scars,

And traced your torment with my fingertips.

 

I see your tears like molten anguish,

As they blaze a trail down your face,

You hide them like a hated shame,

You dare not let them see.

 

Smile for me just once ,

So I can say I made you laugh,

Even when you didn't want to,

Even when your heart was breaking you did it for me.

 

Through Time and space ,

I'll be your friend,

And accept everything that you are,

Because everything that you are is the very best.

© 2014 Vidya Bacchus


Author's Note

Vidya Bacchus
For a Friend.

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This poem was beautiful. It is always nice to know someone is thinking of you. You are a very good poet. I enjoyed reading this today.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Will .You have put a smile on my face with your sweet words :)
That is what I call unconditional love and support… if we truly care we accept their good and bad qualities. Nicely expressed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you Cowboy Dale you are very right :)
I sincerely envy this friend of yours. what noble feelings! a very moving piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Oh my .Thank you so much for your kind words Engluva :)
Woody

9 Years Ago

the pleasure is all mine m' lady.
Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

...................:)
Thank you Simran you are very kind :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well, I just realized that I can relate to a few poems of yours.
I just feel that you have written this for me. I love the the second last verse. It's really heart touching. (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you Simmy .Glad you can relate to what I'm saying :)
A bittersweet poem that shows just how strong the bonds of friendship can be. Sometimes we have to smile when all we want to do is cry, but our friends are the ones whom we are thinking about when we give that sad smile. Great job portraying the friend in this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your kind words :)
I really loved the stanza "smile for me just once"
It felt light and hopeful.

Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rose :)
Such an amazing piece, so much emotion in this brilliant write. I loved it.

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you Kaze :)
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♔ CrownedDevil ☾

9 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-D
Ah! An emotional ride but I love the kindness of an angel. Angels love making smile others so do you and making the world powerful and intoxicated so do you .. here you've penned your all emotions into the words and believe me, am glad you've penned so many new writes in long time. Keep writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Thank you Neon.Your words always make me smile :)
How every one wishes to have a friend like this one! And I know some one is truly lucky to have you as theirs. Lovely poem. Lovely heart.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

9 Years Ago

Hey hunny long time no see .Hope you are good and Thank you so much :)

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Vidya Bacchus
Vidya Bacchus

point fortin, Trinidad and Tobago



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