I won't be.

I dunno :)

                                      I Won't Be.

Who gave you permission,

To enter my heart ?

And now like a vampire,

I can't keep you out.

I won't be impressed ,

By the way that you love me,

The way your body knows mine,

How they fit together like pieces of a puzzle.

I won't confess the way you make me tremble,

Or the way I yearn for you,

When you aren't here,

Or the satisfaction I get from making you mine.

I need to be the victor,

So why do I bend to your will ?

Without a single protest,

I accept you and everything you promise.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

I need to be the victor,
So why do I bend to your will ?
Without a single protest,
I accept you and everything you promise.

There is much truth in this piece. What is that falling in love these days requires manoeuvre Machiavelli would have shied away from.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so very much Pryde :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

100/100...................Fantastic!!!!!~xoxo~

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.......thank you my sweetie.Yo gave me two reviews :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I posted my review too fast and missed the 100... you deserve the 100! ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.....thank you my sweet :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Such a scintillating piece, Vidya!

I can envision the push and pull of the desire for him...
as if he stole your heart...
... but you surrender in the end, because you know deep down, it's a losing battle.

Well penned!~xoxo~:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you again my dearest Robbie girl.You have made me very happy with your kind words :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's always a pleasure, dear Vidya. xxxx :)

[A. Amos]

Who gave you permission,
To enter my heart ?
And now like a vampire,
I can't keep you out.

Great start truly enjoyed above lines...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you AA.You are the best :)