Dear Coffee

Dear Coffee

A Poem by Vidya Bacchus
"

If coffee were a man I would be a stalker.

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                                                                Dear coffee,
I just want to say I'm your biggest fan,
You can always be found hot and black in my hands,
I've tried your cousins chocolate and tea,
But those guys are so not for me.

They don't have your color or taste on my tongue,
I mean come on they aren't black they're brown.
Don't look at me like that I'm proclaiming my love,
I even brought my favorite mug.

You seem scared but its alright,
I didn't come here to start a fight,
No need to call security I'll behave,
I wonder if you'll be so kind to walk into this cage,

Fine,fine,I understand your dubious glance,
All will be fine just give me as chance,
I just happen to have some water and sugar,
Would you mind lending me a finger?

Sigh all my best laid plans have gone amiss,
Because you my beloved refuse to cooperate,
And let me whisk you away far away from here,
To a place where your caffeine I would never have to share.


© 2014 Vidya Bacchus



Author's Note

Vidya Bacchus
Lol..what? I was just being a goof :)

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:), I do like coffee but not always :P

an enjoyable read here,, thanks for writing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

2 Years Ago

Lol ......?thank you Hardeep just being Looney :-)
As long as he's not instant, I like to take my time over coffee. -:)

Beccy.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Hahaha true that.I love to savor mine as well :)
Love this. As a coffee-love myself and that it's fun and quirky :) Thanks for sharing this!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Lol....thank you for reading my Looney lines ;-)
Your strap line is blinding! Made me laugh so much (If coffee were a man I would be a stalker.) I love the intent of this piece but it loses its way a little and the metering goes wrong in places as does the syntax. For example:
Sigh all my best laid plans have gone amiss,
Because you my beloved refuse to cooperate,
And let me whisk you away far away from here,
To a place where your caffeine I would never have to share.

Sigh!, all my best laid plans have gone amiss,
Because you my beloved refuse to comply,
but let me whisk you away from here,
To a place where your caffeine I would never share.




Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Lol thank you John.I did say goofy .I did go a little off in those parts you mentioned .Say what its.. read more
Great poem. i love it, it's absolutely magnificant

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Lol thank you Enayet I was just fooling around :)
Mmmmm coffee, yum yum in my tum!! Jeez, how I do love coffee and I agree with your little subtitle thingy up the top -- I'd be a stalker too! Loved this one, I am smiling so much right now (drinking coffee funnily enough, it should be a sin to wake up this early)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Lol...thank you Kayleigh I'm an early riser but I still need my coffee :)
:) This one gets a big smile - you can never go wrong with an ode to the Dark Master as far as I'm concerned! Thanks for the chuckle, Vidya!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Thank you Rita so glad I made you laugh :)
Sounds good to me, I am dragging a little this afternoon. Very fun poem today Vidya.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Thank you Will it was fun to write :)
Oh the joys of coffee. haha Very entertaining and awesome write, my friend. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend :)

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Vidya Bacchus
Vidya Bacchus

point fortin, Trinidad and Tobago



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