Dear Coffee

Dear Coffee

A Poem by Vidya Bacchus
"

If coffee were a man I would be a stalker.

"
                                                                Dear coffee,
I just want to say I'm your biggest fan,
You can always be found hot and black in my hands,
I've tried your cousins chocolate and tea,
But those guys are so not for me.

They don't have your color or taste on my tongue,
I mean come on they aren't black they're brown.
Don't look at me like that I'm proclaiming my love,
I even brought my favorite mug.

You seem scared but its alright,
I didn't come here to start a fight,
No need to call security I'll behave,
I wonder if you'll be so kind to walk into this cage,

Fine,fine,I understand your dubious glance,
All will be fine just give me as chance,
I just happen to have some water and sugar,
Would you mind lending me a finger?

Sigh all my best laid plans have gone amiss,
Because you my beloved refuse to cooperate,
And let me whisk you away far away from here,
To a place where your caffeine I would never have to share.


© 2014 Vidya Bacchus



Author's Note

Vidya Bacchus
Lol..what? I was just being a goof :)

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Wow! This is a very fun poem. Full of wits,unbelievable rhymes and catchiness. I was actually laughing throughout. I would not have thought of writing this in a thousand years,so perfect! I like the goofy and comic atmosphere,it makes it so simple yet brilliant. I've really missed your poems. Well, I'm back now.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Awww thank you Master you are the best .Glad I could make you laugh.Happy to see you my friend :)
Lol your quote up here, hah, you make me so laugh, it's so true...

I think we women are married to coffee lol.
You are too funny my goofball. I love it. :D
What a write, made me chuckle ...


- Elisa

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

You lady are also the best so we are the bestest of friends lol

3 Years Ago

He he!! hell yes we are :) lol -xxxxxxxxxxxxx-
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Lol....................:)
ahahah! too funny .. but i feel so very inadequate; as all i can bring is milk :{ ... so i buy my coffee on the black market .. :) down on Steam Street ..

no sugar .. no cream!

ps. if you were an exposed Republican ... coffee would now be off the table :))) mug or no mug ;)
really enjoyed you cup of fun!

E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Hahahaha you are too funny Mister Noodle.Thank you for sharing in some goofy coffee humor :)
As a coffee lover I found this delicious

Troy

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Thank you Troy :)
Adorable read! I enjoyed it pretty much :)
And I can so relate to. Much love from a coffee-lover to another one!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Lol thank you very much Anshika.Coffee rules lol
akihsna

3 Years Ago

Haha, you're welcome, VIdya! Coffee definitely rules, cheers!
As a two cup of coffee a day girl, I have to say "Bravo!"...no...chocolate and tea just don't measure up!

:) Julie

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Lol...thank you Jules :)
Oh, yes, but coffee lovers do relate. For sure. NICE.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Much thanks cat :)
Amazing! Very imaginative..

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Thank you Khushi :)
This was smart and entertaining piece of writing, such writes would make many men fall for the writer:)

Loved it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Awww thank you AA.You are the sweetest :)
A. Amos

3 Years Ago

You're most welcome dear...
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

....................:)
HA perfect...as I sip my third cuppa with a smile on my face now. :) Your coffee gives you dubious glances, must be a sassy brand lol

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Of course its a sassy brand 'cause that's just the way we roll lol.Thank you chica :)
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Ha I have to switch up my brand now...cheers pazzo. :)
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Cheers chica :)

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Added on July 24, 2014
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Vidya Bacchus
Vidya Bacchus

point fortin, Trinidad and Tobago



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