The Song Of Seduction

The lure of the darkness

                                                       The song of seduction

Come into my seductive web,

Wrap yourself inside my twisted verse,

Sacrifice your misguided loyalties,

Let them burn on reality's  pyre. 

It's so easy for you to embrace the darkness,

You were always wary of the light,

They claim to despise us,

Even as their jealousy drips green poison onto the floor.

I won't pretend to be a saint,

Just to quiet the venomous whispers,

I am who I am,

Comfortable in my own skin.

Come join me take my hand,

Follow the sound of my melodious lure,

Strumming along the edges of your sanity,

Welcome me in and loneliness shall never fell you again.

Author's Note

Just a thought :)

Reviews

[sonnie ibadah]

"....Welcome me in and loneliness shall never fell you again...."
a temptation and a promise intertwined! brilliant vidya!

[Saddam]

I am who I am,
Comfortable in my own skin.

Beautiful thought dear friend. Great read.

[Neon]

You're became kinda erotic. Seemed interesting. (Kidding)

Very nice flow of ink. I like the taste of night & pleasure you've brought to this insightful piece. Your art's still full of enjoyment, love, piece, emotions & smiles which, I find, very interesting to read along time.

Good to see you still writing. Keep it up!

[Deuces]

Lovely last line. Loneliness shall never fell you again... perfection.

As always, your passion is magnetic in your words.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww hey G thank you .I have missed you much my friend :)

[Rob Santana]

Just a thought??? Wow you have some deep thoughts there Vidya, haha. This is mad awesome!!! "wrap yourself inside my twisted verse" those are some incredible words you've inked. I love this piece...I keep saying that second stanza over and over again, hahaha

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol...deep thoughts indeed.Thank you Rob you mister are way too kind but I will definitely take it :)

[Simran Kewlani]

I like the message through the this poem.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Simmy :)

[Woody]

can't decide whether you're a siren or a spider. either way, you sure are dangerous to us, weaklings.
but as a poetess, you sure know how to weave your deadly web!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Woody lol yes that's some dangerous web :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Ohhhh I like this one, Vidya. While seduction is certainly a lure, you seem to know how to bait the hook to suit the fish! :) To be comfortable in your own skin is to be a good candidate for any relationship. Very well written poem here. Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so very much Lydi :)