The Song Of Seduction

The Song Of Seduction

A Poem by Vidya Bacchus
"

The lure of the darkness

"
                                                       The song of seduction


Come into my seductive web,
Wrap yourself inside my twisted verse,
Sacrifice your misguided loyalties,
Let them burn on reality's  pyre. 

It's so easy for you to embrace the darkness,
You were always wary of the light,
They claim to despise us,
Even as their jealousy drips green poison onto the floor.

I won't pretend to be a saint,
Just to quiet the venomous whispers,
I am who I am,
Comfortable in my own skin.

Come join me take my hand,
Follow the sound of my melodious lure,
Strumming along the edges of your sanity,
Welcome me in and loneliness shall never fell you again.





© 2014 Vidya Bacchus



Author's Note

Vidya Bacchus
Just a thought :)

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"....Welcome me in and loneliness shall never fell you again...."
a temptation and a promise intertwined! brilliant vidya!

Posted 2 Years Ago


I am who I am,
Comfortable in my own skin.

Beautiful thought dear friend. Great read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


You're became kinda erotic. Seemed interesting. (Kidding)

Very nice flow of ink. I like the taste of night & pleasure you've brought to this insightful piece. Your art's still full of enjoyment, love, piece, emotions & smiles which, I find, very interesting to read along time.

Good to see you still writing. Keep it up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lovely last line. Loneliness shall never fell you again... perfection.

As always, your passion is magnetic in your words.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Aww hey G thank you .I have missed you much my friend :)
Just a thought??? Wow you have some deep thoughts there Vidya, haha. This is mad awesome!!! "wrap yourself inside my twisted verse" those are some incredible words you've inked. I love this piece...I keep saying that second stanza over and over again, hahaha

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Lol...deep thoughts indeed.Thank you Rob you mister are way too kind but I will definitely take it :.. read more
I like the message through the this poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Thank you Simmy :)
can't decide whether you're a siren or a spider. either way, you sure are dangerous to us, weaklings.
but as a poetess, you sure know how to weave your deadly web!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Thank you Woody lol yes that's some dangerous web :)
Ohhhh I like this one, Vidya. While seduction is certainly a lure, you seem to know how to bait the hook to suit the fish! :) To be comfortable in your own skin is to be a good candidate for any relationship. Very well written poem here. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Lydi :)

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Added on August 7, 2014
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Tags: verse, jealousy, darkness, whispers, venomous.

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Vidya Bacchus
Vidya Bacchus

point fortin, Trinidad and Tobago



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