My lonely?

A Poem by vigilantebastard

I've joined this site for opinions, i do not care what, i just want feed back... opinions!!! Say its s**t if you think so... but dont .. ok if u must... but i'll kill you.. slowly

Everything is alright.

Where are you, my lonely? It’s only me.

I’ve got some confessions, but not more than three.

When i were just an innocent, and that thing happened to me, i thank you, my lonely. You were right there for me.

I was scared, terrified, time after time. But i thank you, my lonely. Cuz you dried my eyes.

They came with insults, they came with lies, an innocent boy! and all i can think of is...just... “why?"

They laughed and high fived, took it all in their stride.

But I thank you, my lonely. You were right by my side.

No mother to run to, greeted by fists, fury and fights.

So i thank you, my lonely. You were right there each night.

I wish now i could meet me, when young and full of life, to take by the hand and say “everything is alright”.

© 2018 vigilantebastard

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Alexa Apothic Red

Oh, this is wretchedly awful and so sad and painful! I hate that you were robbed of your innocence, but it is apparent that you held onto an amazing amount of inner strength, solace and hope despite the tragedy.. change “mother to run TO” not too. But otherwise, the feelings you convey are so vulnerable and I really just feel for you by reading it!! Sending warm hugs across the pond!!