Otherwise

Otherwise

A Poem by vinny ciambriello
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About a friend of mine

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Otherwise



She does not accept gifts
A card maybe
If it is general
Otherwise
No
The holidays are for others
She lives alone
Reads
She greets no pet
Waters no plant
For her there are other things
A bird on a bough
Out a tall window
A reminder of otherness
A gift
Unwrapped, unkept
Just like her

© 2011 vinny ciambriello



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Interesting. Very interesting. I like it, its very nice. But, different.

"She lives alone
Reads
She greets no pet
Waters no plant"

I really like that part. Not sure why, but I do.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Another well written piece. The vibe was whimsical and subtle but yet it grabs you. 100/100

Posted 6 Years Ago


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you obviously know what your doing, good piece, i thoroughly enjoyed it.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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vinny ciambriello
vinny ciambriello

Brooklyn, NY



About
I'm moody. When I'm onto a good thing with a story, my mood lifts and I'm having fun. it takes several sit-downs to finish a story. About me, I'm a Brooklyn, NY guy. I have the attitude of the .. more..

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