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A Poem by Traci

Visions of you come to mind, melancholy intrudes

I see in your eyes the reflection of my own haunted ones

a certain barrenness, a careless indifference to consequences

part angst, thus part want, fearing our own yearnings

 

We talk in silence, never a must to echo a single line

an anchor throughout life

perpetually connected, no matter time nor space

open tracks of a train certainly not derailed, only redirected

onto a path which always leads to you


© 2017 Traci



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sometime Love plays strange games, but when two are bonded inside strongly, aware and they are in the same wave, even in the hard times they will understand and feel each others, without words... just looking into each others and they will know it, this kind of love that survives, and they will be in each others arms at the end, no matter what the road is.

Posted 2 Months Ago


poignantly penned. Profound poetic expression

Posted 7 Months Ago


Sadness with beauty. Your soul bares it all and shares the elegance of your mind. Amazed!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Traci

10 Months Ago

I am humbled by your kind review, thank you, Sami.
Sami Khalil

10 Months Ago

You are welcome compellingly.
Love to see you are still writing Sweet T. I've come back for therapy as my light is fading and our echos are traces on the wind yearning to be brought together

Posted 10 Months Ago


Traci

10 Months Ago

Thanks P. Light fades from time to time, but strength returns.
i have someone in my life to which this fits perfectly...mistakes, anger, breakups...but there is that path....and it keeps leading in the same direction....maybe that is what "soulmates" means.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Traci

1 Year Ago

Perhaps so, I often wonder that myself.
What a sadness of words, dear Traci.. though tis great to see a new post from you - been a while.
You place your words so carefully but honestly in this poem, use such fine phrases, ' .. We talk in silence, never a must to echo a single line ..'

Thank you for sharing your skills, but so hope you find some smiles and hope very soon.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Traci

1 Year Ago

Written from the depths of my soul, yet a place where hope and smiles always emerge.
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