ancestry , archaeology and other things

ancestry , archaeology and other things

A Poem by vivekanand

1 millionyears ago , a man appeared out of lake turkana in kenya 
he had buried his twelve year old son in its bank,
he had a sloping forehead , half the brain of a modern human
and no chin..
he ventured out of africa .and his sons and grandsons copulated with
the chinless women of middle east and europe..
some of them went to southern russia 
and rolled with the wild horses and tribes of the never ending steppes..

they were to enter india 
scores of lakhs of years later..
the half brains grew double, the chins appeared out of nowhere.
and the sloping foreheads rounded beautifully,
women and men were presentable.
then in india,
far south of the himalayas, arising from a subspecies 
born out of a climatic divide,
a brainless youngman(as they always are, when in love) 
is working out his ancestry..
thinking of his ambitions in a queer world
cursing his ancestors for his failed love..
once in a while rubbing his 
slightly sloping forehead  that 
came from the twelve year old boy in lake turkana ..

now described by the archaeologists who dug him out of his grave..
as 
A COMPLETE FOSSIL SKELETON EXTREMELY USEFUL IN TRACING THE 
EVOLUTION OF HOMO SAPIENS...



- written by the young man with a slightly sloping forehead 
december 2009

with significant information obtained out of reading the morning HINDU one thursday

© 2010 vivekanand


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- ah - this is sublime narration at its best - exquisite writing - moving images - very contemporary, very cutting edge, very current - a deep look inside - a sharp look behind - a biting look forward - like serah said - absolutely brilliant!!! -

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thank u serah.. as always.. i ll give u a title soon.. let me think

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. ha ha ! ... bravo ! ... remarkable title ... justified remarkably well ... this enters the anthology right away ... brilliant work, dear V. ... absolutely brilliant and biting ...

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chennai, tamilnadu, India



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trying to find out seriously what i am.. i trained in medicine.. neither had the expertise, confidence nor the desire to move on as a doctor.. preparing for civil services more..

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