I'm going..

I'm going..

A Poem by vspjaguar
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Journey of life.

"
Where am I going?
Walking towards the mirage;
alone, without any entourage.

Where am I going?
sailing in the sea looking for shores
whilst the tempestuous storm roars.

Where am I going?
straying away from the path laid,
tired of all the usual charade.

Where am I going?
crawling in the dark in the grim night
trying desperately hard to put up a fight.

Where am I going?
climbing this uphill mountain
never going to come down again.

Where am I going?
beyond the horizon chasing the sun,
though it is said it can't be done.

Where am I going?
seeking the answers for the riddles
in distant places, far away by miles.

Yes I am going
going to the no man's land,
the path remains unplanned.

I'm going.. I'm going..
I'm gone.


© 2015 vspjaguar



Author's Note

vspjaguar
a lyrical poem that I attempted, how is it?

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i truly enjoyed this, it reminds me of the questions and answers of my youth and how i dealt with them, usually with poetry...you are on the path to self with this piece and i think it is wonderfully thought provoking. awesome write...in about ten or fifteen years you'll revisit this and change a few lines to suit your present philosophies....or not!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! I am sure this would trigger memories from the past when I revisit this in the future... read more
quinfinn

4 Years Ago

i look forward to your future endeavors. at 21 you still have much to experience. try to laugh and l.. read more
vspjaguar

4 Years Ago

Thank you! I will try my best :)



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We continue going, searching, seeking until we are gone. thoughts well expressed. enjoyed it

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

2 Years Ago

I am glad you enjoyed, thanks for the review.
"Where am i going?"

You are going on the right path!! Well penned.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :)
You projected an intriguing thought perfectly with your words...
However 6th stanza last line does effect the flow. I still enjoyed it very much and you are surely very talented.☺

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

2 Years Ago

I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for pointing out the mistake, I will correct it.
"Where am I going?
crawling in the dark in the grim night
trying desperately hard to put up a fight."- I really like this part, its very relate-able for me, and relate-able is good! Really enjoyed the flow also. Great work! -

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

4 Years Ago

thanks a lot! I am glad you could relate this with you :)
it was amazing...loved it

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I totally love this, very amazed at this write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! :)
I'm new this type of poetry and this pretty cool. I look forward to understanding more about this type of poem. Keep writing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! I will be writing a lot :)
So true, we keep wondering where we are headed and before we even realize, the journey is over and we are gone.

Hats off to you for the dismal truth told so sardonically and cleverly. 100/100

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! my first 100/100 I guess, very happy :D
DIVYA

4 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
We often ask ourselves this question but never frame it so beautifully. Really well written.
I enjoyed this a lot, was an easy read and left room for reflection :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for such a positive review, I'm glad you enjoyed this :)

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vspjaguar
vspjaguar

Chennai, Tamil Nadu, India



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