I'm going..

I'm going..

A Poem by vspjaguar
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Journey of life.

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Where am I going?
Walking towards the mirage;
alone, without any entourage.

Where am I going?
sailing in the sea looking for shores
whilst the tempestuous storm roars.

Where am I going?
straying away from the path laid,
tired of all the usual charade.

Where am I going?
crawling in the dark in the grim night
trying desperately hard to put up a fight.

Where am I going?
climbing this uphill mountain
never going to come down again.

Where am I going?
beyond the horizon chasing the sun,
though it is said it can't be done.

Where am I going?
seeking the answers for the riddles
in distant places, far away by miles.

Yes I am going
going to the no man's land,
the path remains unplanned.

I'm going.. I'm going..
I'm gone.

© 2015 vspjaguar


Author's Note

vspjaguar
a lyrical poem that I attempted, how is it?

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i truly enjoyed this, it reminds me of the questions and answers of my youth and how i dealt with them, usually with poetry...you are on the path to self with this piece and i think it is wonderfully thought provoking. awesome write...in about ten or fifteen years you'll revisit this and change a few lines to suit your present philosophies....or not!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! I am sure this would trigger memories from the past when I revisit this in the future... read more
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

i look forward to your future endeavors. at 21 you still have much to experience. try to laugh and l.. read more
vspjaguar

11 Years Ago

Thank you! I will try my best :)



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you my good sir... are a good poet..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! I was hoping that you would read this, check this out http://www.writerscafe.org/writ.. read more
intriguing questions indeed..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!
i truly enjoyed this, it reminds me of the questions and answers of my youth and how i dealt with them, usually with poetry...you are on the path to self with this piece and i think it is wonderfully thought provoking. awesome write...in about ten or fifteen years you'll revisit this and change a few lines to suit your present philosophies....or not!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! I am sure this would trigger memories from the past when I revisit this in the future... read more
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

i look forward to your future endeavors. at 21 you still have much to experience. try to laugh and l.. read more
vspjaguar

11 Years Ago

Thank you! I will try my best :)
I like such poems and that sense of dark...
Reminds me of a poem of mine
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AdamLebzo/1110545/

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vspjaguar

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! I am reading your piece right now :)

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Added on January 28, 2013
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Tags: journey, inspirational, lyrics

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vspjaguar
vspjaguar

Chennai, Tamil Nadu, India



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HI friends! My name is Sai Prasath,I am from Southern part of India.I started writing poems 2 years back when I realized that a pen in my hand can speak many unspoken words.I use poetry as a tool to.. more..

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