SISTER

A SWEET LITTLE POEM FOR THE MOST BEAUTIFUL LADY TO ME....MY SISTER

HER LAUGHTER IS CHEERFUL..

HER SMILE IS ALWAYS BRIGHT...

HER EYES SO GLITTERING...I SEE IN HER EVERYTHING SHE EVER DENIED...

AND WHEN SHE GOT DRESSED UP.....

I GOT JEALOUS ENOUGH I REMEMBER...

BUT STILL I LOVE HER...

SHE IS MY SISTER.. A SISTER I WISHED FOR....

AND WHEN SHE FLEW AWAY WITH HER MAN...

MY TEARS COULDNT STOP

I GOT HER ROOM....AND HER MAKEUP WAS ALL MINE...BUT STILL HER PRESENCE I MISSED ALL THE TIME...

SHE AND ME....ARE PERFECT TOGETHER I'D SAY...

BECAUSE I WANT LET ANYONE TAKE HER AWAY....

SHE'S MINE.....

MY SISTER....

I LOVE U TILL THE MOUNTAINS AND SKIES

Reviews

[heartspeaks]

this is very sweet. depicting the love of a small sister. Though there are a few odds here and there . No offence. You can change it only if you feel like . I am just giving a suggestion.
HER EYES SO GLITTERING. *
HER EYES SO GLITTERY or Oh! Her glittering eyes...
BUT STILL I LOVE HER... CAUSE *
SHE IS MY SISTER. or
BUT I STILL LOVE HER , SHE IS MY SISTER.
MY TEARS (COULDN'T)* STOP
BECAUSE I WANT (WON'T)* LET ANYONE
Overall it was a sweet innocent and good read.. All the best

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much,please never ever hesitate to tell me where i am going wrong.

[heartspeaks]

my pleasure

[Sonakshi Arora]

This is so well written! Your love for your sister is conveyed so well through this piece.
Thanks for sharing

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure