leave it on him...

i seldom can sleep,

i often keep wondering!

i wanted nothing,

not even sunshine...

all i wanted was,

your smile...

that i feel everyday!

distant our relationship is,

but, you're still near me...

and i love each thing about this journey.

 

so, my love...

let's leave it on the planner of our destiny,

let's leave it on HIM...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Destiny can be a bear. Old wise saying. Make your own destiny.
"so, my love...
let's leave it on the planner of our destiny,
let's leave it on HIM."
Hopeful words and thoughts in the poetry. Thank you Wajiha for sharing the excellent poetry.

Coyote

[The Exiled Wolf]

Raw emotions is enough to tell a good story. Sweet words for him and HIM!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

Thnks so much dear...

[Nora]

This is pretty good and so sweet poem 😊

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much.....

[Nora]

My pleasure 😊

[Fahmida Mehreen]

I absolutely love the way you portray your raw emotions in such form of art. Keep up!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much...sorry fr the late reply....

[Psychotic Lily]

So who is this HIM by the way?
I noticed you mostly write romance poems *winks* inspired by an chance?

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahhaha...well, that HIM is nobody....it's just a feeling....i imagine people together and then suddenly parting ways and all that!..so, just write so that people could relate and feel good!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good message in the poem really liked it..keep it up

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much farhan...mr. magician!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Haha! I love magic😊

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahaha....

[Zephyr]

Its so very true....
Leave it to God and believe in him.
I loved the message you gave.....
Great work dear👌

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you sooo much....

[Zephyr]

My pleasure😉

[Najam Us Saher]

Very correct decision to leave it on the planner of the destiny. If you love something let it go, if it comes back to you it is yours if it doesn't it was never meant to be.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

true najam.....

[Sofia]

A beautiful write..I liked it..I loved the last two lines...😊 A good job indeed!!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much dear one.

[Sofia]

My pleasure!!😊

[Priyanshi]

wonderful poem.....I loved it, Wajiha.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much priyanshi....

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure,dear friend.