My sadness comes out only in the night!

My sadness comes out only in the night!

A Poem by Wajiha Nayeem

The tears roll down my cheeks,
and my pillow gets wet...

i have a thick blanket over me,
so that no one notices i wept!

why is it getting tough for me everyday?
have i lost you or are you still there?

 i need you and nothing else!!

i sometimes want you to be away from me,
and sometimes i want you to hug me tight!
these days i am not myself and i feel no delight.



© 2017 Wajiha Nayeem



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I really feel the heartbreak in this. this is so raw and something that hurts so much to feel

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

4 Months Ago

thanks dear....
Aww that was full of heartache. We all had those feeling once, and if not... they are coming. Very relatable.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

4 Months Ago

thank you so much jessica..
The emotions expressed in this poem are on point. Really love it

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

4 Months Ago

thank you so much....
Simple..and on the line flood of emotions...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

4 Months Ago

thanks sooo much hari!
Emotions weigh heavy here, with enough strength to take any man down.

Gracefully composed my friend; stay strong...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

4 Months Ago

haha...thanks so much friend!
oh it so touching.. like a voice for teenagers and also the lovers of today... it simple but really sweet..

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

4 Months Ago

thank you so much sabinn!
Definitely fueled with passion and deep emotion but tinged with a little dependance. Good fluid write.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

4 Months Ago

thank you so much McFadyen...
You have poured a lot of your emotions in this piece. You have built up the sadness and missing from the beginning of the poem, and it lasts until the third last line. The sudden twist from "I need you" to "I want you to be away" is somehow confusing. While wanting him/her to be away is true sometimes, to be consistent with the emotional flow, you might want to put it in the past, and emphasize the longing for a tight hug at this very moment - this would include the contrasting yet complimentary emotions. Just a little suggestion - poetry is something very personal so don't take this comment too seriously. No offense intended.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

4 Months Ago

thank you so much...
My current situation :( ❤
Nicely written❤

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

4 Months Ago

thank you so much karina...glad you could relate!
karina

4 Months Ago

no problem babe
Lovely poem. The only correction I have is make your i to I instead :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

4 Months Ago

thanks so much......

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Wajiha Nayeem

hyderabad, secunderbad, India



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16..... Hyderabad, India I love poetry!! Hobbies: reading, cooking, makeup.... writing is my passion.. you can even check my work on yourquote.in Wajiha nayeem. more..

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