Among the twinkling stars...

In the dark,

with my bedroom window open..

i sit lonely,

resting myself on my bed!...

a blanket over me,

even though it's too hot!...

i sit with a chocolate bar in my hand,

and cry my heart out!...

no, there's nobody listening,

nobody can hear my cry...

but, among the twinkling stars,

the bright white moon stands by my side!

Reviews

[Li Yan]

It's simple but effective. I love the imagery and short sentences depicted through the couplets. Good job :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much dear!

[Surya]

Your poem I loved it...
Dont be sad dear, as Saher said God is never blind...Smile:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks su...i wont b sad...

[Najam Us Saher]

God is never blind to notice your tears dear....

[Wajiha Nayeem]

yes, beautiful/..

[Najam Us Saher]

Often we feel we have no one by our side....Just accept the fact that you are not less than anyone....