Too deep.

Too deep.

A Poem by Wajiha Nayeem

The water is too deep,
but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!
Let the waves rise,
Let the tornado arrive,
My life I hope is destined to be bright....
I want to fly;
Fly, irrespective of any breaks..
Dream; Dream of only successful flakes.
Let me turn myself up,
Let me become a star that everyone stares.
If I linger in between, and fall off,
Let me rise, rise again to succeed!
The water is too deep,
but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!!

© 2017 Wajiha Nayeem



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This is so uplifting, and inspirational I absolutely loved it! This piece in my opinion gives the reader as well as the writer the feeling of: inspiration, peace of mind, and above all hope.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Lets just say...This was something i really really reallllyyyyy needed right now ... Thanks wajiha... Its really motivating and poetically beautiful.. Feels good to read your work after so long.. Loads of love

Posted 4 Months Ago


Love to see you writing these motivational kind of stuff... "when there is a will there's a way"... extremely well written wajiha :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


An encouraging piece! I like how you put difficulties as water - it can be deep, it can be binding, but finally we will walk on it and take flight!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Daring. Passionate. Liked it :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Months Ago

thank you suhd.....
Beautiful

Posted 6 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Months Ago

thank youuuu❤❤
babe! u lit it

Posted 6 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Months Ago

thanks bae.....thanks for being here love❤
The title itself explains about the poem. A truly deep and motivating poem.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Months Ago

thanks dear.....
I liked the energy and the drive of the words.
"Dream; Dream of only successful flakes.
Let me turn myself up,
Let me become a star that everyone stares."
I liked the complete poem and the above lines stood out to me. Thank you Wajiha for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Months Ago

thanks so muchh...
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
This is a very realistic but hopeful piece. keep it up!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Months Ago

thanks dear.....

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Wajiha Nayeem
Wajiha Nayeem

hyderabad, secunderbad, India



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16..... Hyderabad, India I love poetry!! Hobbies: reading, cooking, makeup.... writing is my passion.. you can even check my work on yourquote.in Wajiha nayeem. more..

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