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Too deep.

Too deep.

A Poem by Wajiha Nayeem

The water is too deep,
but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!
Let the waves rise,
Let the tornado arrive,
My life I hope is destined to be bright....
I want to fly;
Fly, irrespective of any breaks..
Dream; Dream of only successful flakes.
Let me turn myself up,
Let me become a star that everyone stares.
If I linger in between, and fall off,
Let me rise, rise again to succeed!
The water is too deep,
but, I still wanna walk on it and achieve!!

© 2017 Wajiha Nayeem



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This is so uplifting, and inspirational I absolutely loved it! This piece in my opinion gives the reader as well as the writer the feeling of: inspiration, peace of mind, and above all hope.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Lets just say...This was something i really really reallllyyyyy needed right now ... Thanks wajiha... Its really motivating and poetically beautiful.. Feels good to read your work after so long.. Loads of love

Posted 10 Months Ago


Love to see you writing these motivational kind of stuff... "when there is a will there's a way"... extremely well written wajiha :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


An encouraging piece! I like how you put difficulties as water - it can be deep, it can be binding, but finally we will walk on it and take flight!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Daring. Passionate. Liked it :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

1 Year Ago

thank you suhd.....
Beautiful

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

1 Year Ago

thank youuuu❤❤
babe! u lit it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

1 Year Ago

thanks bae.....thanks for being here love❤
The title itself explains about the poem. A truly deep and motivating poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

1 Year Ago

thanks dear.....
I liked the energy and the drive of the words.
"Dream; Dream of only successful flakes.
Let me turn myself up,
Let me become a star that everyone stares."
I liked the complete poem and the above lines stood out to me. Thank you Wajiha for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

1 Year Ago

thanks so muchh...
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome my friend.
This is a very realistic but hopeful piece. keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

1 Year Ago

thanks dear.....

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Wajiha Nayeem
Wajiha Nayeem

hyderabad, secunderbad, India



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16..... Hyderabad, India I love poetry!! Hobbies: reading, cooking, makeup.... writing is my passion.. you can even check my work on yourquote.in Wajiha nayeem. more..

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