Heavy Heart..

Heavy Heart..

A Poem by Wajiha Nayeem

My heart is heavy....
It's bursting into tears of blood!!
No, dear..
am fine!... There's no trouble.
but, my heart isn't beating.
My feet tremble,
My head aches...
I feel like am tired of walking,
baby, I'd hope you take and carry me in your arms!
Let me walk with you...
Baby, don't leave me alone ever,
Don't leave me behind!

© 2017 Wajiha Nayeem



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Such a deep, emotional poem. I personally connected with this piece, it gave me goosebumps while reading this..knowing all to well the feeling of fear of being left behind. This is a amazing! please keep up the good work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


This is so deep and emotional.Hope so you recover soon

Posted 5 Months Ago


a piece of your heart shared with us.
beautiful written .
you are not alone never.
keep it up girl :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


loved the depth and lyrical feel in this one
great work

Posted 5 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

5 Months Ago

thanks so much love....
Emotional and well written piece, I loved it.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

5 Months Ago

thank you Omar...
emotions are flooding through your words

Posted 6 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Months Ago

thanks so much dear.
Short yet crisp
I loved reading it!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Months Ago

thanks so muchhh❤
You are not fine...you need someone to share something of yours..apart from that the poem is as usual very well and nicely penned

Posted 6 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Months Ago

thanks so much......
I relate to this, it's not always easy to say how we really feel. Thanks for writing this. It's a lovely poem.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Months Ago

thanks so much...am glad u loved it...
Sometimes we aren't able to express what our heart feels inside. That moment we require silence and someone to hold us together, while we are breaking into pieces. and Its you who had perfectly designed the whole plot of this piece.........

:) Lovelyyyy work!
keep Goin!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Wajiha Nayeem

6 Months Ago

ohh......thanks so much....

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Added on August 15, 2017
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Wajiha Nayeem
Wajiha Nayeem

hyderabad, secunderbad, India



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16..... Hyderabad, India I love poetry!! Hobbies: reading, cooking, makeup.... writing is my passion.. you can even check my work on yourquote.in Wajiha nayeem. more..

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