Darkness

Darkness

A Poem by Humor Me
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hope you all enjoy

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Your darkness is creeping up on me...
what could you do...spark of life blows out...
no matter i still try to be as vengeful as ever...

everything is till the same
the constellations are disarranged
something wrong with the balance of this world
tried telling you earlier but it seems my words just melt through you

but the the way you reacted was like a thin end of a rope...
gloomed and despaired being
one brings me joy setting me to bleed darkness while u sleep all jolly....

© 2012 Humor Me


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Humor Me
read and comment thank you

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one brings me joy
setting me to bleed
darkness.
A nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


very dark and depressing. no hint of hope.

Posted 11 Years Ago


"something wrong with the balance of this world
tried telling you earlier but it seems my words just melt through you"
I like the thoughts and the strong statements in this poem. Darkness can overtake us. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Humor Me

11 Years Ago

thanks man :)

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Added on July 26, 2012
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