MIDNIGHT CITY

He’s like a city

In his alley there's a passage

where his heartbeat is playing another song

I hear him shouting through my streets in fog

 

Under the moon and above the sea he flutters

So I sail between his deserts
and I drown

endlessly, into the Night.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and poetry is amazing. I like the places and the feel of the words. The poem create vision and mystery. I like the soft tone of the words leading the reader into the endless night and wonder. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Babe Roxx]

Wow, it was like breathing your poem in...magnificent. :)

[WarriorElectric]

Thanks, it was actually inspired by Jim Morrison...glad you liked it :)

[Babe Roxx]

And I Love how you did so, Ella. :)

[X]

Incredible imagery. A powerful description in terms of imagery and personification. Well done.

[Louis McNab]

Lovely imagery, wonderful theme and complete with an absolutely amazing finale. The last line was very well placed, adding a sort of mortal finality to the poem.