The Willow

The Willow

A Poem by His
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Just a poem.

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Look at the Willow
Outside the window
Let her take away your sorrow
Even when you feel there shouldn't be a tomorrow
Watch as she sways in the rain
And let her take away all of your pain
Seek comfort in her embrace
Whenever you feel out of place
Because she'll hold you close
Whenever you need it most
So whenever you're feeling low
Sit beneath the Willow.

© 2016 His


Author's Note

His
Sorry it isn't perfect.

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Imagination is needed with thoughts and not perfection....
dear... so nice one .. the willow.....
wow!! great piece for a willow.. the willow must be proud of u!!😋😊
Anindita😃

Posted 7 Years Ago


Short but nice little poem.
About a simple willow but you make it a beautiful poem.
Has quite some emotions and meaning to this piece.
I thought it was a poem that brings piece, and tells the reader to relax, and sit beneath the willow, and just let everything go.
I enjoyed the read :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


His

7 Years Ago

thank you .
cimmy wuv xxxooo

7 Years Ago

your most welcome :)
very nice! it flows together so perfectly. just wonderful! you did a fantastic job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


His

7 Years Ago

Awe thanks
Lord of mad men

7 Years Ago

no thank you for sharing! soory if i seem hyper i really am not just rock gets me like this.
This is uplifting and delightful. Willows bend and in that is their strength to withstand the hard blowing winds. They are so delicate and flowing...beautiful trees. I enjoyed this and glad I stumbled upon it. There is a wonderful message you share.

Posted 7 Years Ago


His

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
It doesn't have to be perfect to be beautiful. There is always a thing that we can look to and be inspired to move on. But err, I don't have a willow outside my window, I'm thinking I should use the palm tree instead.

Posted 7 Years Ago


His

7 Years Ago

:p you have a wild imagination just pretend it's a willow
It's so beautiful! I love how the willow embraces any person of grief, taking the pain away. I can also imagine the tears of the sad ones watering the tree to grow. In short, this is such a lovely poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


GalaxyGhost

7 Years Ago

That's good to hear! :D
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GalaxyGhost

7 Years Ago

Sure, that sounds good.

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