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Just trying to get use to writing again.

The words pour through me

Creating a sea

Of pain and bliss

There's truly no other feeling like this

True love

White dove

Broken heart

Torn apart

Committed sins

Pure again

The words race around in my mind

Both cruel and kind

They communicate love and heartbreak

They tell of both victory and mistake

They're there when my head is reeling

They're there when I don't know that I'm feeling

The words pour through me

Creating a sea

Author's Note

Sorry I didn't put punctuation and it's not very good.

Reviews

[Angel of the devil]

powerful, and beautiful. i like it. keep writing

[Lord of mad men]

very well done. i love the middle. is has a night clubs poet house feel to it. like i seen a dark room and some one hiden mostly in darkness reading those words. just wonderful. it is sad and sweet. it speaks to me wityh great depth thank you for sharing. you did a wonderful job!

[His]

Thanks again lol you don't have to review all of my writing. I'm currently at school right now but I'll review your writing when I get a chance.

[Lord of mad men]

same i in school but i am fast in shccol it is fine there is no need for that. i know that but i read stuff i like and i just keep on reading till i have had my fill.

[emmajoy]

Please, please.. don't punctuate because for me your words read (aloud) lare ike a non.stop ebb and flow of tide.. thoughts on the move, emotions endlessly touching and leaving, leaving and touching the other. Your poem's refreshing (not meant as a pun).. tit allow this reader to find /her own pace and place.. and interpretation. Beautifully put.

[His]

thanks ^_^

[emmajoy]

You're welcome.