heidi

heidi

A Poem by eddie

there is this one girl

she makes my world swirl

she doesn't have the easiest life

she would like to kill quiet a few people with a knife

but when she smiles

it can be seen for miles

when she laughs you cant help but laugh along

because it seems like you just belong

she knows she means the world to me

and she owns the key

to my heart

i dont ever want to part

she knows her name

and is not ashamed

she will tell you when your wrong

and she is really strong

my girl Heidi

© 2010 eddie


Author's Note

eddie
ummm i dont know this one just kind of wrote its self.... so im not sure if its good or not..

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Nuh uhh....shes mine >_>

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

does that cat remind you of me??
you make me sound so amazing >< you really do understand me though.....never met someone who can do that without having been in my shoes. how do you do that? you point out all my faults and make them sound so lovely.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 18, 2008
Last Updated on April 11, 2010

Author

eddie
eddie

barberton, OH



About
im not the greatest writer... but i want homest opinions of what you think more..

Writing
L.O.V.E. L.O.V.E.

A Poem by eddie