In All Its Glory.

I wrote this from the English Lake District a couple of years ago whilst on a long weekend break. A beautiful site and inhalation of senses.

 

 

The Green static caravan stood high upon a hill.

Overshadowed by the tall ancient trees.

Oak, willow and spruce's galore,

reached high into the sky,

swaying gently in the breeze.

 

The winding path lead to the lake,

boats of all sizes, birds swooping

on the shimmering blue water and

echo sounds, from around the mountain

in the distance.

 

The early morning dawn chorus

awoke me each morn, like

an orchestra giving its first symphony.

Nature in all its glory, green

carpeted spread.

Inhalation and sight, of this wonderous site.

Author's Note

All comments welcome, good or bad.

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

Oh, I couldn't say anything bad about this. These well-chosen words of one who loves nature are sweet music to me.

[LadyLove]

Hi! Me here!---Just wanted to say that I love the way you share nature as your eyes see it; Like a picture postcard for the imagination! I like how the first two stanzas guide us to the water's edge. Nice!

[emmajoy]

This lovely, as your other poems are. That last stanza really sums up the whole feel of nature and its beauty. A relaxing, peaceful piece of writing. Thank you, thank you for sharing. :-)

[TL Boehm]

very visual, i can almost smell the grass and hear the wind rustle the leaves. Well done.

[John Walker]

I enjoyed your peom. Nature and poetry in all its beauty.

[jayne sterne]

Again another fantastic poem, you feel like you are there, taking in the aromas of the morning, you write to perfection, making the reader feel every word. wish I was in that place you talk of. well done jayne sterne x

[Cats Eye]

Nicely written, it made it feel like I was there, great job, i enjoyed reading this.

[Lau Thiam Kok]

What a postoral piece - pieceful and soothing. Thank you Anne.

[Carrie Montgomery]

so relaxing and soothing...I can almost hear "The early morning dawn chorus" and smell the air. You painted a lovely picture, Anne. You certainly do have a "waywithwords"!

[April Child]

How lovely. I feel right there with you in your beautiful descriptions. The swaying, swooping and shimmering are all very hypnotic. The green landscape sounds lush and serene.

Just one typo I noticed in the last line 'inhalllation' should be inhalation I think.