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A Poem by Gabby The GAB

We've been up all night with less sleep
The necessity of reading with so much penalty
We've been pressured by a single beep!
Unknowingly, we couldn't react to stay on track
What happened earlier will be remembered forever
Have you thought of remembering it forever?
Thought of a bad score? Yes, that is a serious matter

Depression, this might get a lot of attention
Anxiousness, feel it with entirety of seriousness
Key, to open up the door to success?
An interrogation? or just a mere question?
We cannot honestly answer what was asked, why?
Behind every answer lies an intimidating additional question
How can we find a way and not give up?
Find a ladder and go all the way up!

In every conversation, it always ends the same
Stop your whining and just do it without blame
People talked as if they know something
Sure, they might know a thing or two but that was just a feeling
Emotions are temporary, don't let those obstructive ideas destroy you permanently
We know that things happen for a reason
Do you remember where you had been?
The path you had already encountered
Have you already felt it within?
So let us take it on the chin

You need to stand up and fly
The only limit are the skies
Around, know your allies
Allay all your whys
And open your eyes
Be proactive 
And wise
RISE!

© 2020 Gabby The GAB


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Critique: (In every conversation, it always end the same) always ends the -- The verb "end" does not agree with the subject "it"
(The only limit are the skies) Limits -- The word "limit" doesn’t fit this context

Review: Interesting sentence structure, it somewhat matches the theme of your poem. I like the encouragement and positive feel that delivers a good moral and the impact your ending makes my smile :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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kind of a deep write, but enjoyable. love the emotions in it. Like it a lot. you seem to write with heart.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inspiring and motivating write, I liked the way this poem talks about all the possible sadness and in the end ask the readers to fight and rise up again.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Critique: (In every conversation, it always end the same) always ends the -- The verb "end" does not agree with the subject "it"
(The only limit are the skies) Limits -- The word "limit" doesn’t fit this context

Review: Interesting sentence structure, it somewhat matches the theme of your poem. I like the encouragement and positive feel that delivers a good moral and the impact your ending makes my smile :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 10, 2017
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Gabby The GAB
Gabby The GAB

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