A Dawning Universe

A Dawning Universe

A Poem by Robert Francis Callaci
"

cosmic musings

"

Each particle of light brings with it life.

A billion trillion bits of individual power

plants energizing the empty void of space with

a purity of energy that fuels the stars.

 

A wave of effervescence washes over the

cooling universe bathing it  in a sea of protons

and radiation streams. The presence of this thing

called light fills and engulfs the cosmos with

a subdued and self contained luminescence.

 

Oh Light! Oh Bright!

With your gift of sight

We now see the stars this night

Blinded by the dark no more

Our souls restored; leap, soar and roar

From the brightness that we store

 

Evermore! Evermore!

Will we be knock, knock knocking at Your door

For the Light in all its shades

Only dims but never fades

 

 

© 2009 Robert Francis Callaci


Author's Note

Robert Francis Callaci
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I find this Prose/rhyme style interesting Bob...something I might consider in the future.
I enjoyed this "Ode to the Universe"...what a different perspective you bring to it...hope this light never goes out (at least not in OUR time!

With a nod to Poe...we'll be knock knock knocking at YOUR door, to see what other treasures you have in store!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I absolutely love this poem , & how you describe the works within "Our Universe " I see why you won !

Posted 7 Years Ago


I absolutely love this poem , & how you describe the works within "Our Universe "

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Francis Callaci

7 Years Ago

thank you - it's one of my little favorites.
Farmgirl

7 Years Ago

;) You are very welcome I enjoy reading ..
I love the flow and how beautifully written it is. Congrats

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Francis Callaci

7 Years Ago

thank you kindly- It's one of my favorites - I live space and the mysteries the universe has to offe.. read more
I find this Prose/rhyme style interesting Bob...something I might consider in the future.
I enjoyed this "Ode to the Universe"...what a different perspective you bring to it...hope this light never goes out (at least not in OUR time!

With a nod to Poe...we'll be knock knock knocking at YOUR door, to see what other treasures you have in store!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i'm usually not into the worshipping tone as it tends to go the rah rah route. but this was nice. i could hear it... i felt uplifted.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Robert Francis Callaci
Robert Francis Callaci

Port Richey, FL



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My passion is writing- I've been writing a mythological tale on the many facets and faces of GOD- I've been a net poet for the past seventeen years- I'm a former admin at lit .org and active one (Patr.. more..

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