(from the book of songs, sung by the Archangel Gabriella)
THE NIGHT MAKES ITS OWN LIGHT
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As Adam first looked upon Lilith, he was dumbfounded by her beauty. Strange feelings traveled throughout his body; making his head dizzy and his feet weak. She was a vision of loveliness, the smell of her made his manhood swell.
As Lilith first looked upon Adam, she was quite pleased with his handsomeness. Her body tingled with a desire that felt familiar to her. She also sensed that she had quite an effect on him, which she found amusing, and would soon use to her advantage.
They embraced one another and made their own heaven whilst the on-looking angels could do nothing more then blush…
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Lucifina summoned a legion of angels from the lower heavens to paradise. They all marveled at GOD’S new children and all the living creatures that inhabited this little pocket of heaven surrounded in the mist of Lucifer’s domain. And now they were to become a part of this new adventure and their hearts were gladdened.
The First Ones voice rang through the angelic throng and commanded:
You will disperse your spirits within the fires, winds, earth, water and air of paradise.Your spirits will reside in the hearts of the trees, of the mountains and the seas, inthe brooks and in the streams and on the moons golden beams. In winds will youride and in clouds will you hide .Elementals will you be and God’s glory will you see.You will guide them and teach them how to command; all the elements of the seas,skies, and the land. So be it, so let it be done.
The angels cheered and dispersed there spirit throughout paradise…
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As Lucifina looked upon Adam and Lilith while they slept in each others arms, She remembered the song She and her Soul Twin made without GOD’S consent. Adam was Her song, and Lilith was His. And She loved them both.
Beautiful writing. Poetry is heavenly here, and the prose reads much like scripture (as I'm sure you intended.) I must admit that this is a BOLD undertaking. So far, in my opinion, you have handled it amazingly well. Guess what I'm trying to say is that this thing has alot of GUTS!