An Apocalyptic Surprise

close your eyes

~doubt~

 

leap of faith

waking from a dream

nothing left to do but die

 

~fear~

 

free fall into a black hole

calm before the storm

the beast waits

 

~hope~

 

a choice

sinner or saint

the apple or the seed

embrace illusions tapestry

free will

 

deep in the jaws of hell will you find heaven

and to your surprise you come to realize

that they are both one in the same…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

wow, absolutely crafty, brilliantly invented and sculpted in form that no doubt immediately takes the reader in the moment, the idea of heaven and hell give structure to the realistic nature and
ideas that speak eternally in light of the apocalyptic meaning, doubt, fear and hope, the spectrums,
artically rendered and a plerasure to read.

[Cherrie Palmer]

as always I enjoyed the way you have placed your words. Great job!
This was smooth and full of imagery. Cherrie

[deeps]

Oh! Wow! I love this, This is amazing, I know where you are coming from on this write.
Sinner or are you a saint oh wait you can't chose cause it lies in all of us. Which way
be attend to be well that's up to us. Wonderful, write This is so amazing and going
in my favorites.

[fUtUREs_NbA StAR.]

yo bob i like it i hope u can write it

[bluessadmood]

Doubt..leap of faith..waking from a dream..nothing left but to die
Hope..a choice..sinner or saint..the apple or the seed
deep in the jaws of hell you find heaven
and to your surprise you come to realize
they are both one in the same..
very strong ,deep thoughtful write,i really enjoyed it..
lovely write..