A Ship, Unbound

A Ship, Unbound

A Poem by Jesse W.

Sailing on the wind
Floating through the dawn into
Mysteries unknown

Nary a cloud nor strife
Cast a shadow of a doubt
Our hearts ever unbound 

Drifting through the sky
Reflected in clearest blue
Crest the waves with skill

© 2016 Jesse W.

Author's Note

Jesse W.
Tribute to Salvador Dali's Bridging the Seas with a Boat

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Excellent use of words. Imagery is amazing!!

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sigh, gorgeous :) The heart carried on serene tides...wise and knowing and elegant :)

Posted 2 Years Ago

"Our hearts ever unbound", great imagery of freedom to explore. What a better way to travel then on the ocean. May we always have the yearning to learn and discover life. Richie B.

Posted 2 Years Ago

I loved the wording!
I liked how you describe things in the first stanza!
Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago

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4 Reviews
Added on March 23, 2016
Last Updated on March 23, 2016
Tags: ships, painting


Jesse W.
Jesse W.


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