Bold

Bold

A Poem by Jesse W.
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It takes boldness to find romance

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Sweaty palms, nervous glances
You hold your breath, pray
There'll be no second chances
Once she comes this way

You see her in the distance
Heals clicking along the halls
Dream of holding her in a dance
At romantic summertime balls

Anticipation sets in
You neither waver nor fold
Though you're shaking in your skin
Too woo her, you must be bold

© 2016 Jesse W.



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This is an awesome piece. As a guy I think we have all experienced this at one point or another. We all feel like we have fallen for someone who wouldn't dare to love us back. But it actually pays off to be bold. Speaking from experience, it all works out. Great piece. Loved the strict rhyming scheme.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jesse W.

1 Year Ago

Every man has to overcome that first hurdle, even in the face of rejection. Even if she says no, the.. read more



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Sometimes it seems so...captures the essence of such anticipation really well Jesse...that moment I guess is like the saying "first expressions matter"...a tense moment and boldness is a good word for the courage it takes...blessings...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this!
You did a great job on this!
Keep it up!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amazingly written :) a new sort of poem that i've read :D keep writing :D

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Jesse W.

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much!
I loved this, you captured the feelings of a young man in this situation, spot on. I graduated from high school in 1972 and you brought me right back. I sure wasted a lot of emotional energy by not being able to pull the trigger.
Yes young man you nailed this one. It belongs in an instructional booklet for young men starting Jr.High. Great job.
Richie.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jesse W.

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for your kind words, Richie. I wish there was an instructional booklet for all y.. read more
This is an awesome piece. As a guy I think we have all experienced this at one point or another. We all feel like we have fallen for someone who wouldn't dare to love us back. But it actually pays off to be bold. Speaking from experience, it all works out. Great piece. Loved the strict rhyming scheme.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jesse W.

1 Year Ago

Every man has to overcome that first hurdle, even in the face of rejection. Even if she says no, the.. read more

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Added on May 8, 2016
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Jesse W.
Jesse W.

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