(14) Raymond Bliss

He has never been like other little boys
That play so happily with their toys
He is different is young Raymond Bliss
He wants to grow up to be....a mad scientist

While others play with toy soldiers and cars
Or pretend to be astronauts in the stars
Little Raymond is chasing his pet cat instead
Determined he will catch him and cut off his head

He tried getting the dog who put up a fight
Poor Raymond gave up when he got a nasty bite
So he dug up his hamster, who passed away when overfed
He tied the body to a car battery to try and raise the dead

Unfortunately the dead hamster fizzled and went pop
It made Raymond jump in fright, it made him hop
So he decided to dig up the goldfish as well
Then he decided against it, because of the smell

Now there are plans drawn up, to be unfurled
His evil scheme now hatched to take over the world
Raymond wants to set vampire robot bunnies on man kind
It is just a shame because his pocket money he can not find

His mother says "time for bed" so he sulks up to his room
This his prison from whence he plots doom and gloom
He is a very strange boy is little Raymond Bliss
Determined to be the most evil mad scientist

copyright
Chris Smith 2010

Reviews

[Katannaism]

Haha this is so whimsical in a way. And somehow has an adorable evil to it. This is really comically interesting!

[Vanessa Rico]

This is a well-writen comical, albeit creepy poem. Great work!

[Cerebriation]

Very interesting. You have some kind of imagination. Something tells me that this write is very introspective. Someone's inner thoughts at work. :) Awesome!

[Sukriti Suki]

Very clever!! intriguing and a good mix of humor and the dark human side..enjoyed it!

[Murtuza]

This is simply awesome! I love it!

[White Ink]

oh a Wicked one! that evil lil kid but still adorable lol

[Judy Ponceby]

Chris! This is awesome! LOL I love the whole twisted plot of it :) Made me laugh. Thanks for sharing.

[Kiri Nells]

Chilling...creepy... with just enough humor to make it sick. Another great write!