Not alone

Not alone

A Poem by Wem Ortiz
"

the feels 4 years 6 months and 28 days

"

how does it feel like to be alone.
with no one to talk to 
with no one to spend time with
how does it feel to be not okay.
when it troubles your mind.
when you just try hard to fight it. 
how does it feel being left out
when the world turns its back from you
when they closed their doors
how does it feel  to be this uncomfortable 
numbness, looking at blank spaces
and in any cases. Sleepless. 

how does it feel for you?
no you don’t feel the same way that I do
you have all the things that you've wanted
another spare of tire that you can change
anytime when I’m off air

you are not alone.
replace me if you can.

© 2015 Wem Ortiz


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Loneliness. A odd words. Some people need constant attention. Some of us can be okay with silence and quiet. I like the thoughts and the questions in poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wem Ortiz

8 Years Ago

thank you for appreciating sir :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I don't believe i've ever read anything I could completely relate to until I came across this poem.

"how does it feel to not be okay"

I have known that feeling for multiple years, and even today, I still fight it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wem Ortiz

8 Years Ago

:) awww

lets continue to fight. life is a mystery
and I enjoy it, we might b.. read more

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

70 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on October 15, 2015
Last Updated on October 15, 2015

Author

Wem Ortiz
Wem Ortiz

Bacolod, Negros Occidental, Philippines



About
a lyricist, a student a person. more..

Writing
Oneness Oneness

A Poem by Wem Ortiz


Time Time

A Poem by Wem Ortiz