My little sister

My little sister

A Poem by Adesanya Yewande
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its a poem i wrote while thinking of my little sister

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Although i was not there when she gave her first cry
But whenever i see her in tears i die inside
She deserve more than she has been given
Her smile usually stop the time
She shine like the sunshine
Her beauty is beyond comparism
Her every word brings laughter to my face
She is like a light to the dark part of me
She bring joy wherever she is
Now apart from her
I could see how significant she is to me
I miss her.



© 2016 Adesanya Yewande



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Heartwarming at first, yet heartbreaking in the end. I can relate the bond you share with your little sister ( in likeness I have to my little brother) written with simple yet chosen words :)
A few time tense mistakes.
Second sentence I would suggest from "feel sad" to "die inside"
Very good work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Adesanya Yewande

1 Year Ago

thanks kirasoul,your point noted
Adesanya Yewande

1 Year Ago

i like it better,it bring out the emotion more,like the way i really felt,once again thanks
Kirasoul

1 Year Ago

my pleasure :)

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Added on March 21, 2016
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Adesanya Yewande
Adesanya Yewande

lagos, epe, Nigeria



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am a young lady who loves to read and write,i feel in reading you get to learn much and know more than you have ,and in writing you get to express your feelings and let out your inner though about lif.. more..

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