Another dream of him

This isn't my best poem. It's another love poem, about the same guy that I write all my love poems about. I have loved him for six years and I am too shy to tell him, and I am almost 100% sure that he doesn't feel the same way.

Oh take me back

Back to the day when I could have had you

The day when I was what you wanted

When I might have had a chance

 

The day I should have jumped into your arms

And kissed you on the mouth

When I could see you everyday

And gaze upon your face

 

You are the only one I love

The only one I’ve ever wanted

I would chase you cross the world

And make myself to be with you

 

I would change just who I was

To get one chance to say “I do”

I am completely yours

I will never get over you

 

I was made to love you

But you were made for more

You were made for someone worthy

Worthy of your time

 

Your touch is worth a useless price

Your mind is precious gold

Your eyes were made to see much more

Beauty that I can never be

 

You’d laugh if you knew this was for you

You’d throw this in the trash

And wonder why a useless girl like me

Could hope to be with you

 

But I can’t let the feeling go

The feeling like we could be

If only I would get the guts to talk to you

If only I could find you

 

But I protect my heart

I cannot stand to hear no

Not from you, not yet

So here I sit on my bed at night

And wish that you were here

 

Because I would hold you

And kiss you on the head

And tell you I would never let you go

And I never will

 

Author's Note

This isn't my best poem. It's another love poem, about the same guy that I write all my love poems about. I have loved him for six years and I am too shy to tell him, and I am almost 100% sure that he doesn't feel the same way.

Reviews

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is a heartfelt piece with so much emotion.sometimes the hardest thing to get past are our on regrets.but writing is a great way to expression what we hold on to deep inside.God bless
Hugs debby

[Valentine]

You hit the nail on the head again with me..I have the same thought of someone from long ago,,I will love him until I die..I did not have enough faith that he would come back after leaving to another state,,No calls, letters no post cards..Monts I sat and wept..Then like a fool I married a complete stranger..One week to the day late,,He came to my mom's and asked for "The girl that had his heart""Mom had to tell him I had been married a week to some one else and it crushed him..jump out and take the chance..I wish I had..God bless..Valentine

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is really very beautiful...I always love such an honest and passionate form of writing! This one really came right from your heart and that's why it's so emotional and beautifully written..
The flow is also just perfect and so well maintained throughout the read..!
Awesome :)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

None of us are worthy of love because love is just another name of God. It is a name most slandered; people claim to love everything from cars to pizza when they only covet, take pride in something or lust after a thing. But God can exist in the relationship between two people. "Wherever two or more of you are gathered in My name. I am there, in your midst" So many relationships fail because they are not built upon the Rock of truth and understanding. There can be no fear in love but true love dispels fear because fear involves torment. But true love is available to us all, in our relationships as well as in our lives to be constantly there and caring for both if we only accept and try to understand love in truth. My advice is to be honest with this person about how you feel and that at least provides an oppurtunity for him to tell you his feelings in return.

[Emily B]

Writings that come from the heart are just right. We need those.

[Forest Green]

Well, you ought to recheck your percents because they might have shifted quite a bit by now.

Anyone would be proud to have your attention to this level. Give it a chance and go for it...why not, pray tell?

Thanks for the charming send...;)

Forest

[Amor-de-angel]

I think it is perfect. Could you not let him read something you have written for him,maybe it may make him see you he is worthy of you not the other way round.

This is an honest heartfelt piece, you expressed your emotions well.
Well done

[Imperfection]

I don't know whether this is your best or not. So far I haven't read anything else by you but after reading this one, I surely want to read more of you...

Such an honest piece of writing. You've held nothing back.
This is one of the best things I've read in all of today.

[Just Manoosh]

It may not be your best poem but it is very lovely, a plea directly from the heart for all the things that you can not say out loud. As with you, 99% of my poems are about one person, a demon of my past who tortures me stills .... it seems I also torture myself with.

This was done with grace, and I like that.

Mx

Pssst, you are not unworthy