What's Knocking

Glory comes knocking

On your door

Which takes you

Nowhere but forward

Turn the doorknob

Out of the wonderment 

For the truth.

That comes to question

Is it really yours?

Appearing only in a form that 

You never thought it would be

It's only your mind that struggles

With opening the door.

But your heart already feels 

what's on the other side

Is it really life?

Is it the illusion that your mind thinks?

One day it will come to your door

And the glory will be all yours

That is if you can be 

The person that you want to see.

Reviews

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Lovely and learned. Very uplifting and hopeful - succinct with just the right amount of words to express your point so eloquently. Thank you for sharing this. I am reminded of a quote by Mozart wherein he said, 'To talk well and eloquently is a very great art but to know the right moment to stop is an even greater one.'

You have succeded.
Light,
SiddARTha

[HorrorMaster]

I thought it was good, I like it.

[Justin Street]

Oh wow, really hard to put to words for me. It's like looking in a mirror and asking yourself "do you want to wake up the next day." wonderful write =) -Justin

[G. Anderson]

I LOVE THIS!

[Rory CJ Frankson]

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As a writer with the very same views in common with this young Poet. My Nephew, by the by. Which I'm sure, biases me greatly and have just got off the phone with. As he need publish here the greater body of his wondrous Spirit.
His poems are very uplifting and, to talk to him. A Well Spring, and its a spiritual guideline. To commune, with this particular young man!.

This poem, is beautiful and the questions being raised are I'm sure for the multitude to consider. The personal refection of Ryan's Poems are from real hardships, and great personal courage. To bring his world, to where it is so blessed. In a very perspective Faith. This not so much a review, as it to honor
my Nephew. For his determined effort, as a young Bahai man.

To struggle to live, what I see...

Saintly Character manifest, in action. I love him greatly and pray that all who read his Poems. Are uplifted, leave reviews and post Ryan. Get to know the man. A caring person, who loves Humanity. Heart & Soul...

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The Heart of The True Poet: Ryan John Daniels
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Romon in Review 05/27/10 11:07pm
Quenel BC CANADA Peace... Ro.