The Real you.

My best friend and i wrote this together one summer.

You say my beauty is grand

But that is only when I'm in your hands

But how can that be true when there is no Beauty to be seen?

You told me you would never be mean

When you talk to me in that special way

You don't know that you've made my day

Do you talk to other girls that way?

Are the sweet things you say meant?

Or to many girls has that been sent?

I love you true

I really do.

Would you please just show me the real you!

 

 

Reviews

[Kelley]

and that's the struggle of life.
I like how this flowed and how
it made you feel for the writer


Kelley

[Kimberly Davis]

WOW, I really love this!! You've no idea how many guys I felt that way about. Just show me the real you. Awesome ending line!!

[EnterUSerName]

I liked this as well.

[Joe Bosworth]

Uh-oh! Bad guys! Or is he? This is pretty sweet! I think I likes it! One thing I'm sure you didn't mean to(*meant) just a little spelling error. But this is awesome makes the reader wonder!

[Laughing Lunatic]

Good job! I liked the way it flowed. =)