Mr. Perfect

Mr perfect says he's hurt.
What do I do? tell him i still have his favorite shirt?

Yes it's true. I'm still holding on..
Even though his feelings for me are completely gone.

He says he's broken and confused.
Should I tell him how I feel? thrown aside and used.

Months have passed since our little "fling"
Now he's got a new girl and he's asking me what I think.

Come on now, what do i say?
Oh boy, he wants to see me today.

He broke down and cried.
I held his hand and lied.

Told him ways to fix it all
He left me to go and give her a call.

Do I stop him and confess my true feelings?
I ponder as sit and stair at the ceiling.

Mr. Perfect is still hurt
The sleez bag answered, she's with some guy named Kurt.

So we're back to where we started
Two friends. Just as though we'd never parted.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me if it's horrible!

Reviews

[Pinky]

its a lil crumsy in some places but over all good. the theme is awesome!

[EnterUSerName]

I can't say its horrible. Its wild :)

I like it.

Sometimes guys don't know what they have until they lose it (me included!!)

[MARZ]

nah but the rhyme seems forced. i like it on the whole though; that'd be my only gripe.

formarzly yours

[Christina2]

I read this and can relate at this very moment, specially the lines
"Yes it's true. I'm still holding on..
Even though his feelings for me are completely gone.

He says he's broken and confused.
Should I tell him how I feel? thrown aside and used.

Months have passed since our little "fling"


wow.... I am thrown. Great write

[xxCrashingxx]

wow horrible not at all!
i loved it

[Cattie]

It's heart felt and true.. A piece that is so can never be horrible.
Keep writing what you feel. You can never go wrong when the feelings
& the ink flows.
My best to you, Poetess

[Alicia Richey]

It happens all the time. That's why love is so tricky. Loved has called so much pain that is should be a crime. Hey, I should used that line one day. Well read more, soon. Very nice poem.

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A Possible Edit?
"So we're back to where we stared" did you mean started?

I loved the write & it is a position or a situation we all have faced
the dilemma...what to do

Embrasse'
Vickie
p.s. No This is Not Horrible At All

[Champion]

Horrible it isn't.

The circle is nicely closed. Very impressive style and imagination.

I liked it much.

C

[speakingcolors]

I love this. I can relate. Though I didn't date this one girl, I love her but she's with someone else. I want to tell her how I feel but I don't want to taint what friendship we already have. Great stuff!