Illusion

Illusion

A Poem by rayven

The loudness of this silence killls me, 
I'm afraid to breathe for you may leave. 
I know you're only an illusion. 
But I like this moment of false vision. 
Your smile I've forever missed is there, 
Everything is perfect from your toes, 
To your messy brown hair. 
Perfection. 
Slowly I move wanting to touch you. 
Alarm stings your eyes as I get near. 
Blink; You're gone. 
I look for a sign that you were here. 
Nothing. 
The emptiness of this silent room kills me. 
Again you had ot leave. 
I knew it was just an illusion, 
But I loved that moment of corrupted vision.

© 2010 rayven


Author's Note

rayven
The rhythm is a bit off, sorry.
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This is great!!! I loved it!

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rayven
rayven

University Heights, OH



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Ello :) My name is Rayven. I've been writing for about six years now. I've dabbled in the "poetry" section, I'm still kind of wading in the "short stories" department and I'm getting ready to dive .. more..

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