Looking Through the Keyhole of The Doors Of Perception

Looking Through the Keyhole of The Doors Of Perception

A Poem by sherwin

Seeing through the keyhole of the doors of perception.
Building these walls with hand fulls of our conception.
 
Perplexing people with 
"Wanna getta room" lines
Spew the nonsense 
we wade through.
The appetite 
for destruction
Paves The Way
says the serpent's
voice mail,
business card,
and license.

Synchronized melodies 
placating senses 
blurred 
like time's 
forgotten masses.
Blood bath and 
beyond your reach,
with brains blown out 
in the alienated architect 
of sleep.


© 2011 sherwin


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This is amazing in its simplicity. And please don't take simplicity the wrong way. There is simplicity that is effortless, then there is simplicity that captures true magic, and can make you think harder than the most intricate penning. I love the subject matter. From reading your writing, and seeing what you've reviewed of mine, (and I could be wrong, but...) I feel that both you and I share a...disgust, to be honest, for society and what has become of humanity. I loved this piece though, good work, and keep writing.

Xavier

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is a good write. keep at it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this poem reads almost like a scholar's rap and I like that.
Spew the nonsense
we wade through.
Love this line, defiant and full of the spirit of sarcasm.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

whoah i love this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is amazing in its simplicity. And please don't take simplicity the wrong way. There is simplicity that is effortless, then there is simplicity that captures true magic, and can make you think harder than the most intricate penning. I love the subject matter. From reading your writing, and seeing what you've reviewed of mine, (and I could be wrong, but...) I feel that both you and I share a...disgust, to be honest, for society and what has become of humanity. I loved this piece though, good work, and keep writing.

Xavier

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simplistically relevant and completely researched, well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moving write. Succinct and telling. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this very much, very dark. Reminded me of Bret Easton Ellis if he wrote poetry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, quite the powerful write here. {Well shared feelings, you express yourself very well}

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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sherwin
sherwin

woodbridge, VA



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i like writing ,playing music, painting. It makes me happy to do these things because of my everyday struggles with certain negative aspects in society. This is how i deal with that. I'm am not a .. more..

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