Snuffed

this is the way the light goes out

stealing quietly from the room

a kiss ending

before it is even known

a too brief nudge

a touch that doesn't quite exist

shuffling of smoke

shifting of sand

a note that only hovers in time

this is the way a life goes out

Reviews

[The Cobra Lounge]

The title caught me attention. Snuff..puff..like death and life itself; our breath and passion can quickly go out. I love that thought. A bit depressing...but you pen it so beautifully.

[Wicked Dahlia]

thank you for your thoughts. some of the most beautiful things in life are often a little depressing as well.

[The Cobra Lounge]

I couldn't agree more....

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you defined the title with strong examples in this poem. Each line adding to the emotion and the desire of the writer. Thank you for sharing this excellent poem.
Coyote