The Dawn

The Dawn

A Poem by vamgelanpire
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It is a poem when I was suffering from a pain

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The dark was slowly covering me

The pain was fading because of air's coldness

I almost close my eyes feelin' my bloods flowing

Alone, falling into space

 

 

I can't see in darkness but I can feel mourning

I can't hug him but I can feel his soul

I can't stop this thing but I can let it happen

I can't bring you back but I can remain you in my heart

 

 

Suddenly someone hold my hand

That scene was like in a movie

I try to open my eyes to see his face

But the brightness of the sun make it hard for me

 

 

Until I totally lost my consciousness and feel curious

Who is this guy who holds me tightly

I'm back in the flesh with gratitude

For a stranger who let me to start again

© 2011 vamgelanpire


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Added on October 16, 2011
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vamgelanpire
vamgelanpire

Manila, Philippines



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