The Human (Disg)race

Never will I find anything as ridiculous as man kind
The men seem obsessed with nothing but undressing
And the woman quite the opposite
I sit with friends as they talk of tits and arse and sigh
Civilisation came to naught they care for nothing but a f**k
Women are no better spending their life looking for someone to spend it with
Wether they like them or not they have a habit of lying in the bed they've made
People are convinced that a partner will make them happy
But with role models like parents how can you blame them?
Passion lives in a bottle and on records
Love is dead
Never have I heard the word and felt any meaning
But forever mankind will chase it seeing it in man woman and child
I speak of these ills but I'm not above them
I like every other fool and lier have proclaimed my love of another
I knew I loved her. So I did, but love is a word like any other
So I sit and drink and speak of f*****g
Yet at every word I die a little in side wondering is there nothing else
Is civiilization forever to be ran by the c**k and the balls?
I grow tired of mine and want nothing of them
I want to die alone. I am perfect and no-one deserves me

Reviews

Brilliant title.
I understand what you're getting





Brilliant title.
I understand what you're getting at here. But human beings have always been this way; just not as extreme and vulgar as most are these days.
This poem shows that you clearly have respect and a good understanding of who's real, and who's not.
Very blunt language, but we need that. Otherwise, you would never get across your point.

[FR Toscano]

Killer last line!

Reading you is like looking in the mirror - except for the perfect bit.

Reads like spoken word. If that wasn't the intention, it should be. Published?

[Legion]

Well, except for not wanting my c**k and balls, I have to say "DITTO" on it all. You have definetly caught on to what kind of sewer the human race an be. Kudos.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

This is dope!! I was drawn to the title and I'm glad I read this! Very well put together! I love your sharpness and how direct this piece is! Great write!