a love so long lost

i feel it needs more yet i dont yet know what to add

I laid there in silence your warm breath on my face

the warmth of your body your soul I embrace

 

it felt like the one the only true love id  know

if only i knew how easaly id let you go

 

to lay in this silence so verry alone

and think about just how apart we have grown

 

it tears me apart now to see you with him

i'd give annything to hold you in my arms again

to feal your soft toch your warmth on my skin

 

o how i miss the tender touch of your lips

or when we'ed dance in the moonlight, my hands at you hips

 

now when i run into you it kills me to see

you seem so happy why cant I break free

Author's Note

Reviews

[The Flawed]

This is real good, but I would have finished it a little different, like:
now when I run into you in town, it kills me to see
you seem so happy so why can't I break free

[deeps]

I like it, i can feel the divided love
This is a wonderful expression of feelings.

[Mercury Mirrors]

-_- Zomg...I so feel this way every day with my ex...We were together 9 months even engaged but when I broke up with him he acted like he couldn't be happier...talk about a jerk -_- But I AM happy now =/ just a little broken inside, what's knew, eh? I love this :] Simple rhyme & form but strong emotion in it still. And I don't really think this needs anything else. Less is more sometimes & this is just right ^^.

Many Kudos :],
Lizz