wounds of my past

hopeful fellow...

The wounds of my past

lingering and wondering

through the days of my life

then you came along

and heal this dying soul

This magic coated masked melted like candles.

Your resonated flames made it into liquid nitrogen.

Making it unattainable

For me to grasp and hold into

It evaporated in the sun kissed skies.

My black salted tears evaporated

By your brightly warm glow.

I feel alive and free

The wounds faded into scars

Leaving a mark of lamented past

Reminding me that I’ve learned

I came back to this wondrous existence with you at my side

I bid farewell to the dying lands of grief

And promise not come back

As long as your light and wisdom shines on me

Never fading

Reviews

[Shep]

Man you tear me wanting share these poems with a woman.

[Carissa Marie]

I love this. Really. Parang gusto ko sha sabihin to someone. Great work. :)

[Pax]

aha! kabayan... di ko alam, your one of us...hehe.. now i know... thanks ng marami...

[Carissa Marie]

Hahaha. You're welcome po. :D

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

"I came back to this wondrous existence with you at my side
I bid farewell to the dying lands of grief
And promise not come back
As long as your light and wisdom shines on me
Never fading."

Haaay, Pax. I'm really inspired by this. Paganda ng paganda ang mga gawa mo. Kung sa akin, para itong yung "New Life" ko.
Tama yan. Go go go!

[Pax]

wow... that's a great complement dear dhaye... thank you very much...
i feel like my words today is dried not like before... my last year's work is quite special to me...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You showed your pic na ha? Para kang bata sa pic na yan. Kaso malungkot talaga.
Next time, yung naka-smile naman. Di ba there's a change na in your life now? :)

[Lonely Islander]

A very touching and beautiful poem, inspirational and hopeful. Love poems can be cheesy, sometimes so cheesy that it stinks. But this one was nowhere near cheesy, maybe it had that delliciousness of mozarella but lol sorry im hungry! Anyway a very beautiful poem...well done my friend:-):-):-D.

[Pax]

lol... sorry to make you hungry... ;D
thank you my friend... I'm glad you find this piece tasteful. :D

[Jamal]

so inspirational and beautifully written

[Pax]

thank you my friend. I really appreciate your thoughts.

[Barbara Walker]

This is beautiful!, just beautiful!

[Pax]

thanks you so much...I'm glad you like it...

[Cole Hayley]

Very beautiful once again man. I can't say enough about your poetry.

[Pax]

thank you cole, always a pleasure to hear from you..

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

A really touching poem of yours :) It's really beautiful and I'm glad that the speaker finally has something or somebody to shed beautiful light to their dark world. The world is really so much easier to bear with friends at your side and you have made that acknowledged in your poem

Lovely write

[Pax]

thanks kabayan... its a moving on poem with the help with someone...

[Pax]

and found love...

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

XD XD XD good luck XD I'll cheer you on!!! sorry I'm a sucker for such things :)) Any girl will be happy to receive it :)

[Pax]

that's nice..hope she'd like it...but it's all in the past now...thanks

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

you're welcome and really I'm pretty sure she'd like it

[RachelReaper]

Excellent! Reminds me of the saying, "Every thundercloud has a silver lining" Or at least I believe that is how the quote goes. Hoping for a better tomorrow is always the best way to look at a bad situation, and your word choice is great.

[Pax]

thanks, i never heard of that quote..seems very meaningful..just like the poem..

[RachelReaper]

I had always thought so:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to do. But must release the sadness.
"I feel alive and free
The wounds faded into scars"
When the wounds are just scars to remind us. We can move on if we are lucky. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Pax]

thanks my friend...