Life’s trouble

a 7 word poem....

The exit

to

Life’s trouble

is

Patience

Author's Note

share your thoughts my friends...

i need alot of patience right now....

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! In just 7 words you made a perfect quote.

I agree. It's not easy to get away with life's trouble. It needs more time...and more patience.

So I should tell it to myself, too. Patience...

Nice one. Sort of self-reflection. Thanks for this, Pax. :)

[Pax]

thanks Dhaye.... i need it more of this now... stretching to the limit... :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome. :)

[gabrielle]

Patience is never my virtue. =). while i agree that patience could bring good results, such good result could be made possible when patience is coupled with a good/careful foresight. =) nice quote pax!

[Pax]

often times doc Gab, I am to hasty at my decision making... so i never would have many of this at hand... i just realized the quote when too many problems pour all at once... your are right.. and i think your the second one who have said that... :) your as insight as the last review Gab... thank you very much!

[gabrielle]

welcome =)

[Peter H]

i get the idea here , its philosophical i like it

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Love the fact that you haven't used "Love' in the place of "Patience".

[Marie]

Well, it's one of the exits anyway...

[Renée]

OY! along with good decision making...True...but hard to do....Endure...

[Jade]

Yes you always have to be patient and stay positive even when it seems impossible :)

[Tom]

I'm not sure I entirely agree, patience without action can be detrimental, but patience in action is something I would consider vital.

[Pax]

i like that...very much insightful of you my friend..thanks

[Jamal]

i could sure use a lot of that right now

[Pencrafter]

Patience does help us cope with life's troubles. This is one of those poems that you can spend hours playing with, substituting different words in various places to see what happens. Interesting and fun.